JabberHut

Here I am! So I don't forget, I'm totally gonna crit right here on the comp. That way I won't get in trouble for posting so late. :D The Sanctuary ...

Alright, came here as directed. :) Sorry it took so long, btw. I had plenty of distractions to keep me away from typing up this crit. :oops: Their master watched ...

Hey, Aedomir! Finally got to this! Sorry it took a while. :oops: I did grammar check on the parts I didn't hit (the last section of Chapter 3). I rather ...

Alrighty, I told you I had your critique sitting here. To prove it, I'm gonna type it up. :D Ugh, ugly font. :shock: That's probably a reason why people are ...

Hey, 3B! Sorry I haven't been able to post it, but the site was down when I was able to put it up, and then I got loaded with homework ...

Hey, Valor! :) I'll vote on your poll after I type up this crit, but I'd like to say that I really don't mind. You can post it in Advanced ...

Hey! Sorry for the wait, got a bit...distracted. ^^; Feeling rather uncomfortable, the girl had dressed quickly before heading [s]down stairs[/s] downstairs to find her father talking at the door ...

Hey, man! Took me long enough, but I have the critique as promised. :) Then, [no comma] an anvil and a blacksmith appeared, hammering some sort of metal [s]appeared[/s]. The ...

Yay! It's your short story! ^^ She straightened his collar, rubbed her hands down his coat to get the dirt off, what ever she could to make him look nice. ...

Yes, I have noticed it. I usually only use the [quote] tag, but I noticed it and it slowed down my critiquing (as 3B would know :wink:) I type out ...

Hey, 3B! ^^ Happy to help! Wanted to double check (since I'm not English, had to use Wikipedia :P) so I could help you out as to how to change ...

Here we go! ^^ Two came from the back, [s]and they each held guns[/s] each holding a gun . The third man that had exited— the one from the passengers ...

Alright, let's see what I can do for you today. :twisted: Part 1 Finally, after a few more close turns—despite Brandon’s promise—the Black’s arrived at the spot. It was a ...

School is always exhausting! All the work they pile on us now, especially third quarter. That seems to be the hardest part of the year, more than the fourth quarter. ...

The smile on the other side of the screen. Lovely quote. You received a smile on the other side of the screen. :wink: I commented on Silly Sydstix blog when ...