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Gyr! Yay, something to review by you! And it’s quite the long one, so my critique shall be just as long. :twisted: The meeting was already underway, of course, and ...

Lol, I agree. I read it as Homer Simpson's donut , rather than do not. I guess chatspeak is an entirely new language to learn, and I know very little. ...

:shock: He wasn't kidding when he said he would hurt us.

Gyr! *pounces* It looks like you need someone to stop by and rip your story to shreds…:twisted: “Penny, you know better than that, [exclamation point or period] [s]how[/s] How many ...

Hello! I noticed I had a critique for you sitting around, so I thought I’d post it. :) A little different [s]then[/s] than last time we met -- she [s]seems[/s] ...

Hi! I saw this and thought I’d pay a visit. :) Had someone told Johnny that “Can you please take Sandra Tscarediway to 57 Rosebend Avenue?” was a question to ...

Oh em gee, hi! It’s been a long time! Thought I’d stop by to say hi and leave a critique behind. ^_^ I can hear her soft weeping beside me ...

Hey, Night! I saw your work and I thought I'd pay a visit. :) In the distance , you could hear a faint whimpering, almost as if it were a ...

Hi, Jamie! I found this sitting around and I thought I'd pay a visit! :D Anticipation [s]coarsed [/s] coursed through her [s]exasted exhausted body[/s] veins , sending pulses of energy ...

Hello! ^^ Man, you're asking me to review after Jasmine, Gyr, and Via looked over it? LOL, they're crits will top mine. I'd bet almost anything! (My YWS account is ...

Hello! Thought I'd pay a visit. :) First of all, is there a way for you to adjust the font. It's a bit blinding and can scare off reviewers. We ...

Even I can't ignore this one. :lol: Yes, I have the urge to reply. :lol: I'm already in pain. :P

Question: Would you guys suggest (prefer) for me to go back and fix up/improve chapters as soon as I finish them and get feedback? This means you'd read the chapter, ...

Hello, Goth! Here upon request. :) I'm not a poet, so we'll see how well of a review I can give... Love is the thing that makes you crush , ...

Dino! Sorry it took a while, but I had other priorities. Anyway, here's the crit I promised. :D Allomorph, the master force in online world trading, banking, and technologies , ...