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Sorry, I have no idea what to say. xD She's speechless 'cause it's so amazing. :wink: I thought it was wonderful, 3B. There's just one thing I'd like to point ...

I agree with your quote entirely, but heck. This sounds fun. ^^ I put in my fantasy (which was put to a halt to all my readers due to this ...

Well, you don't exactly see an eclipse everyday. XD

Hello, sorry for the wait. My school decided I should work more than critique. :lol: So I'm doing this at school! :wink: "Leave me alone, Kochi…" she snapped, [period instead] ...

Hello again! Sorry for the wait, my school decided I should stop posting/critting on YWS and do homework instead. Good times.. *sarcasm* Anyway, I'm posting this up at school so ...

"Does it matter my age?" Tessa responded in her whispery voice. "No, I guess not..." Naomi trailed off. "Thirteen, if it's any of your concern," she said after a moment's ...

Jade looked to River, together in deep thought. Jade's immediate thought was that Wes would think of something. He got them this far, anyway. North and south... "I--" her voice ...

Sara was pushed into the wall as Naomi closed the vault door. She glared at her. "What's the big idea? This is all just a joke, you know! The kid's ...

I think of my story like a movie anyway, but I never put actors themselves in place of my characters. I just let the film roll by, if you will. ...

Kayla liked the horse, she was a very gentle creature. She understood why Brenda was fond of her. "Perhaps a horse is the best company," Kayla said, "but I daresay ...

There are such thing as "traitors" in the game itself, but I don't think that's what we're going for? More like teamwork, battling against the Horde. Fun times! ^^

"The north and south?" Jade wasn't afraid to repeat. She looked to River again for the usual guidance. "Don't worry," Wes said. "It'll only take more strategic planning." River knew ...

Kayla agreed and followed Brenda through the crowded streets to the stables. Eyes followed the elf and human, wondering what they were up to. Brenda ignored them, seeing as she ...

"Tha bank?" Sara repeated. She could check her account, withdraw some cash to help her survive the next however long she'd be there. She followed Tessa into the bank and ...

"Now I'm going to be late to the party," Sara grumbled, shoving her keys in her pocket. "The party will be your last worry," Tessa said with a creepy smile. ...