JabberHut

Yay! Part 4!! “That’s probably true,” Henry nodded. “Funny, [no comma] how I’m Captain, and not him.” “Well , I actually like to steer the vessel sometimes!” By the way, ...

Yes but thats too literal-Fizzy Drink-Plus Soda is much easier to say then Fizzy Drink, plus it makes me sound foreign *cough* I definitely say Pop is easier to say. ...

Please don't yell at me for capitalization or punctuation. I left it like this purposely because I want it to be completely up to the reader's interpretation. Tell me your ...

This is my third attempt. I turned this in for English as well (I used my devices correctly, earning a 15/15!). I'll post it, and see what comments I get. ...

I personally refuse to have swearing in anything but dialogue, or first person I guess :lol:. It shows character, but it shouldn't show literature/grammar. When used in narration (i.e. third ...

Hello, Andy! :) I read as I go, so any questions that I may ask may be answered later on in the story, and that's okay. It's good that I ...

I read your first parts and... I loved it! Had me hooked the whole time. I found a couple typos and such here and there, but I have been asked ...

O.O No way. Jabber, is it just me, or are you critique-crazy? Psh, I wish... I've been falling dreadfully behind. But! I'm catching up now. I did a couple during ...

It says nothing about which one is correct Very Happy and i think Soda is correct. Just makes so much more sense *cough* I forgot to put the title of ...

I'd like to quote Reference.com! :D A soft drink is a beverage, often carbonated, that does not contain alcohol. (Carbonated soft drinks are more commonly known as soda, pop, tonic, ...

I read it! :D Told ya I was gonna read it! ^^ I loved it. It's only a script and I felt, as the audience, that I was actually part ...

I'm starting to catch up on my critiques. I'm all excited. So here' goes! Btw, I'm not going to check the others to see if I repeated anything. I usually ...

Back for the second part! :D He’s brighter than that fire under [s]Bezelbub’s [/s] Beelzebub desk. The two [s]brother’s [/s] brothers were opposites, [no comma] from the sixteenth universe. Sixt

Thank you so much for PMing me the links. I was going to crit a couple weeks ago, but I got completely confused as to what to crit, lol. I ...

I've wondered about this before, and I'm glad you did something about that. ^_^ Great idea, as usual! :wink: