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Yay! It's up!! ^^ The monkey climbed up Henry and threw his arms around Henry’s neck. Henry hugged the chimp. Maybe a pronoun, or use the captain or any other ...

Hello again! I taste blood. Great hook! ^^ That fist that met my cheek, [dash instead] was it really his? Underlined -- Repetition. It's a bit annoying in this case, ...

Very good, Easy. :) Your imagery was very impressive, if I do say so myself. Here's just a few observations, both compliments and suggestion. Raven hair; thick and coarse -- ...

A wonderful poem, girl! I have some suggestions that might explain why you're unsure of it, but it really is written well. :) Locker door creakily opens , revealing Photograph ...

If this thread gets buried into nowhereland, and you wish to post a link here, don't let its location hinder you! This thread is set to email me for every ...

It's pretty much just a personal choice that depends on your beliefs and your ideals. I choose to make love to my boyfriend, it's my body and I get to ...

They tend to bother me too, especially when surfing the internet though. When visiting business or such important sites, one would think their grammar and punctuation would be close to ...

I am against sex outside of marriage, but how would one even have the time? We should be doing homework, going to school, and doing plenty of other things. Plus, ...

But yeah. For that, bre adventurous! Are we trying to kill me? XD

We should know how to use grammar properly before we can ignore them. When ignoring them, one creates a sentence that's can be difficult to read properly , so grammar ...

I have to top Andy's critique? T_T As you walk down the first aisle , the thick tangle of silk wraps around you, suffocating, enticing. You wonder, vaguely, if any ...

I never comment on this forum, but I had to say I loved this. It makes me smile every time I see it. ^_^ And the colors are amazing. It ...

I'm registered. Smart thinking, Nate! :wink:

Whenever I want to rhyme [you spelled it wrong in the title!], I can never think of what word rhymes. :lol: I go to and figure out my rhyming words ...

Brie "Enough chatting!" Harvard snapped as the raptor roared loudly in the room. "Close your ears, sir," Brie said as she aimed her gun at the raptor, still seated next ...