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Re: Stars #1
Hello, there! Someone mentioned this, so I thought I'd take a peek. ^^ I may repeat things people have said. I never know if the post is edited or not. ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Honor #1 [rewrite]
Oh, Kylan! You just made me happy! :D I haven't read Honor in forever and a day. You made my day! Again! *hugs* *clears throat* Right.. the crit! :D An ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Grammatical Errors In Public
Anyways, I HATE it when people do this: Item, item and item. It's SUPPOSED to be: Item, item[COMMA] and item. I think the same way you do, actually. However, I ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: My YWS Reunion Dream...
I know, I'm reviving a lost topic.. but it was only lost for a couple months. So there. :P This isn't really a Reunion, but it kind of is too. ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Flames of Injustice
Hello, there! Thank you very much for entering the On Fire contest hosted by the Instructors. I do hope you enjoyed writing this as much as we enjoyed giving you ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Kirby Hatz
Aww! You just made my day! Haha, they're so adorable! ^^
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: To Write In Greek
You can post two! You can post five thousand, and I wouldn't mind! :D I see Azila and Phorcys beat me, but I'll still critique and if I repeat anything, ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Song in My Head
Hello there! Welcome to YWS! If any questions, don't hesitate to PM me. I'm more than happy to assist. You have a cute little poem here. It made me smile. ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Food
I guess it's useless to repeat what Suz and Snoink said. :lol: I liked it, considering the assignment. Watch your punctuation, though. In an assignment this strict and having an ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: YWS Radio April 5th, 2008 Discussion
Hilarious show! Missoura! Don't get me started. :P
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Circus Pirates 6
Inside, there was the largest room I had seen thus far on my earlier “tour” of the ship. You walk into a room. The beginning of this is weird because ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Memoirs of the One You Forgot
Hello! :) I read the poem, and I truly loved it. I can't find the words to describe it, but I really did love it. Let's see what I can ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Blank - Chapter 1
Hello, there! Here to give you a general overview. :) Grammar: There were some typos, sentence structures, and punctuation that I fought myself to ignore. If you went through it ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Fantasizing
Hey, there! Long time, no chat! :wink: The yellowed pages of my book flipped in the gentle breeze, bringing me to my book marked place. I'm pretty sure bookmark is ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: YWS Now Uses Digital Camera Reflective (DRC) Technology
Is this code for "Post your pic"? :shock: It's very handy, though. :wink:
Apr 2, 2008