JabberHut

Sorry for the wait! The previous crit I did took some time to post. ^^; A scent of a beast that chased him from his home and brought much pain ...

I tried typing this up last night, but I never got to finishing it. I'll try again, then! :) Many hours later , Gideon awoke in a cold sweat. The ...

I tried SBs for a few weeks, but it's just not my forte. However, based on what I've explored in the SB forums, it is getting a bit ridiculous. Starting ...

I say English, but it's probably because my teacher's so cool. ^_^ Music/Band is the runner-up, though. I have a lot of fun in that class. XD

Hi! I got your first chapter done today. It's just a matter of posting the crits. T_T But I have them! And here's this one! :D A janitor bot, hummed ...

Hello, there! I'll give you a nice crit -- hopefully before I have to eat. We'll see. ^^ Big Ben sounded in the distance , echoing through out the thin ...

Hello again! Let's see what I can get done before the bell rings! :lol: Very short, sweet, and to the point. The no capitalization thing isn't really bugging me. It ...

I have returned upon request! I shall now critique like I never have before! :D The last sentence that Jack understood had had something to do with Anne, and then ...

Father's can be taken in two different ways, which are the ways ya'll have identified. It can be possessive or it can be the contraction. It's only because we're all ...

Hello, there! I was just browsing the forums and found your unreplied piece of work here. And now I think I see why. :D I'll give you an overall critique ...

I agree that it should be allowed as long as it has the R rating. But, and this may just be me, if the writer put "graphic scenes" or something ...

Hi! Sorry for the wait, but I'm critting this like I promised. :D I apologize for repeating anything the others have said before me. ^^ Lethero looked over the temporary ...

Hi there! It's been ages since I saw some of your work, even if it is for a class. :wink: Well, you sure mastered your punctuation here. I have no ...

Hello there, Choco! Must I repeat what everyone said about critting lyrics? Lol, I don't critique them much. But! I really liked this! Great imagery, and by the end, I ...

Hello, there! Sorry if I repeat anything the others have said before me. ^_^ My hair was drenched; [comma instead] the hood on my sweatshirt wet all the way through. ...