JabberHut

Hello! Sorry it took so long to get it posted, but I have it! No worries! :D [s]Booker's[/s] Booker glanced at the doctor and at the surgical scissors in his ...

Hello! Here upon request and desire! :) “No, but thank you. [comma instead] ” he says. His eyebrows, his cheeks, [dash instead] everything was perfect, [s]unflawed[/s] flawless . He turns ...

Hello again! The only sound is the steady roar from the receptionist’s computer, [no comma] and the occasional hiccup of a crying mother. For a conjunctive like and to get ...

Heylo! I'll try to get this up quick. I gotta sleep some time tonight, LOL. I apologize for repeating anything! :D I woke up this morning and ate a bowl ...

Hello! I have critted your entire chapter; it's just a matter of posting, lol. We'll see if I get to that tonight. >.> I highly apologize, by the way, if ...

I can donate myself for some time. :D

Yodles! :D If I repeat anything, I apologize ahead of time. Believe me, [A dash?] after everything I’ve been through, I need this more than anything else. I’ve always been ...

Yippee! *huggles* The doors opened outside , and a small boy came in carrying a silver platter with a large glazed hunk of meat sitting on it. “Girl, you can’t ...

Heylo! “Lethero, can we stop and rest? My paws are sore,” called Porla, a she-wolf with fur that was darker than the sky above them. “Europa, Polosk-see if you can ...

I was wondering about that. I found myself on YWS instead of doing my homework. :lol: Passing the word! And get plenty of rest, Nate. :)

Part Three! :D Relative after relative walks up to me. They hug me until I can’t breath, they kiss me with their sticky lips, they cry in my hair. And ...

Here I am again! :D Sorry if I repeat anything! ^_^ I think Matty notices, [no comma] because he takes longer to respond than usual. Jumping onto my bed , ...

Hi! :D Sorry if I repeat anything said above. Once I start critting, I crit straight through. :D She sits across the room from me, [no comma] and doesn’t seem ...

I'm back! Expect a summary of my critiques at the end here! :D Grammar Cameron and Gideon walked out into the long hallway. "Each of these rooms are home to ...

I'm sooo sorry for the wait! I had the crit, and it was sitting on my desk, ready to be typed up. I never got to it, though, and I ...