JabberHut

You have encountered Bettie the Amazing Kung-Fu Butterfly which lunges at you with Stupendous Kung-Fu Wings! Haha! :lol: And Jabber, you're lucky I didn't go 1|\|73®|\|375 on you. Mr. Green ...

Hello again! Don't be afraid to ask for critiques. That's what I'm here for! :wink: However, I don't think I can top Mesh's awesome crit there. :shock: Stupid little worms, ...

That killed my eyes, Perra. :shock: You have encountered Man from deep, deep, dark, dark, deep, dark woods which lunges at you with Snarling and Biting! The lines were so ...

Hello! Sorry this took so long to post! I had a couple busy nights and couldn't get everything done at once unfortunately. :oops: Grammar and First Impressions His strong pronounced ...

Hey, Mat! Sorry I haven't gotten to posting this straight away. I've been slightly busy, BUT I am here to pay back for all those lovely reviews you have given ...

Hey, Ahoy! I notice JFW beat me here, so I'll try not to repeat anything she's said. I'll just go along with my basic grammar review and comments at the ...

Hello! I was browsing through the forums and saw your untouched piece of work here. Though I'm no Naruto fan, fanfics should still attract readers like me. :) Grammar Corrections ...

Hello! :) Grammar and First Impressions Rosie always heard and saw things. We all know that healthy, normal children see and hear things everyday , but Rosie was never any ...

Aww. I lost the game. :(

I'm ba-ack! Sick of me yet? :wink: Before Eating Apples Drink Good Claret for the flats. I never heard this, and I play flute and piano. You'd think I would. ...

Hello! :D Staring forward – staring at nothing, staring at everything – he kept his hands on the steering wheel and returned to the hospital room; [comma instead] re-imagining the ...

I'm baaack! Miss me? :wink: Grammar and First Impressions Rick strode into Drake’s office-like room, [no comma] and then over to Drake himself, who was sitting quietly in a small ...

Hello again! Grammar and First Impressions Fear. Pain. Sorrow. Emotions that so often plagued Drake, he wasn’t quite sure which was which. I haven't found your writing style to be ...

Hello! Comments of previous part's critique Concerning your comment to my crit in the previous part: If you catch a reviewer with questions that will/can be answered later on in ...

Hello! I managed to fit this into my schedule after homework! Woot! :D She gently pressed her hands against the tattered bark of the tree [s]gently[/s]. This sentence is very ...