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Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 2 (Revised)
Hello again, Vernon! Grammar and First Impressions Laid on the table was no banquet, just pittance, [no comma] compared to what their boss had. Yet it was a time of ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 1 Revised
Hey, Vernon! I never actually read your story, so I'm kind of excited! :D Grammar and First Impressions The enclosure erupted with noise, [no comma] while the stands reverberated with ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Free Reviews?
Hi, 3B! I finally posted Part 7! Would you like to take a peek? ^^ 12 Shocks of Xmas (Pt. 7) I'll look at Fat Boy in return. :D ~ ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: 12 Shocks of Xmas (Pt. 7)
It's been ages since I continued this, but I've been so busy, I couldn't find the motivation to continue it. Now school has come to an end, so while I ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Better Portfolio Management!
Oh em gee, you're amazing! I already played around with my portfolio and no doubt will still do that. Now I can hide what I don't want people to see! ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Queen of Hearts
Wow, Ahoy! This was really good! Not gonna lie! I think I know what you mean by it. I definitely got the first part of it, then I hit the ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Nate!
Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to Na-ate! Happy birthday to you! Whoo! ^_^ ~ Jabber ~
May 29, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 5 (Part One)
Wow, I was late to this one. Didn't notice it was up 'til five minutes ago! :oops: I tried to interrupt her , but she wouldn’t let me. Pulling my ...
May 24, 2008 -
Re: Memento Mori (Edited)
Fart! This isn't really that bad. There were some spelling/grammar issues I spotted. I can come back and check that if you'd like, but because of limited time, I'll skip ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Life
Hello! I'm not much of a poet myself, but hopefully I'll say something worth noting, lol. Eimear has taking care of the punctuation for me. My only concern was the ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: You're on in Five
Hello, Sock! Here upon request and desire, of course! ^_^ To me, it was just another way of dirtying up a piece of clothing and securing another chore you had ...
May 21, 2008 -
Re: Revolution...
Hello again! Thought I'd stop by, seeing as this is a homework assignment. I'll do what I can to help you out? What class is this for? It looks quite ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Chapter one
Hello there! Welcome to YWS! I notice no one has reviewed your work, so I'll whip out my red pen and start markin'! Horizontal shafts of rain muddied the sky, ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 4
Hey, 3B! I noticed it was up and thought I would be prompt, haha. I apologize for anything I repeat, btw. :D And I'm at school, so who knows if ...
May 20, 2008 -
Re: Stubborn Lover
Hello, there! Welcome to YWS! :) I apologize if I repeat anything, but I usually just review straight through. :lol: My stubborn lover, my mistress at heart -- she [s]coxes ...
May 14, 2008
