JabberHut

Now I feel bad for asking a lot. :lol: You've seen it, of course. [You mentioned you have.] I'd like a comment, though. ^^ The Dragon, the Dog, and the ...

My, Twist definitely has a juicy something to critique, so no rush at all to getting to this. I've seen your reviews, though, and they always make me giggle. I ...

Oh dear, you definitely have a lot in front of me. Here's something that could use a few pairs of eyes. If you don't get to it, that's fine, but ...

Hello, Claire Snoad! Welcome to YWS, and I hope you've made yourself at home here. It looks like you are [or maybe you're not] aware of the review ratio. Two ...

:smt035 :smt038 :smt034 :elephant: *plays Happy Birthday* Happy birthday, Snoink and Griffage! ~ Jabber ~

I really wanted to write a short story and struggled for a good idea. This is still iffy and blah, but it made me happy to write. :lol: Now I ...

Aww, thanks Aet! It makes me happy to see you critiquing again! And it makes me even more happy that you critted something of mine! :D Yeah, I never edited ...

Rose! Oh man, I'm critting one of your poems? Yours? An amazing poet's? :lol: Let's see what I can do for you! ^_^ they steal me away. It is no ...

They had amazing characters I fell in love with (literally in the case of Fang. Smile) The dog in Harry Potter? Or the guy in Maximum Ride? :lol: I used ...

Hey, Lynlyn! I read the previous three parts as well, and your story is very enjoyable! You had me hooked the entire time! I didn't even look at the clock, ...

Hey, Derek! Grammar I'm going to skip the grammar/spell check 'cause my eyes are killing me today. T_T I can come back and give you a sentence-by-sentence if you'd like ...

Hello, Fart, dear! :D Let's see... Ew, you're description of the scalped guy was fantastic. I definitely had a clear visual, and it really disgusted me, lol. Good job with ...

My eyes were murdered, resurrected, and murdered again. :shock:

I told you I'd do this! I'm sooo sorry I put it off for sooo long! I feel so bad! :smt089

I'm back! This looks pretty long again. Hopefully I'll get it finished, but my eyes my blow up on me halfway through. Grammar and First Impressions Sierra ran aimlessly, [s]just[/s] ...