JabberHut

Hello! I found this before you had to tell me! Aren't you proud? :D Grammar and First Impressions Normally, I would continuously have to clench my jaw and force myself ...

Twist! This is a really good read. I don't want to say too many things 'cause I save my comments for the end. I really am liking this! ^^ I ...

Hi, Thing! Don't normally see your work, so I'm excited to take a look here. ^^ Please excuse my poor poetry skills, and I hope my critique proves useful in ...

Brad! I'm sorry for getting this up so late, but I had a few things needing to get accomplished within my life outside of YWS. It hurt me to stay ...

Yays for JFW! You're amazing! I wanna be just like you when I grow up! :D ~ Jabber ~

JFW! Congratulations again on winning the review contest hosted by our dear Suzanne! It's my pleasure to be one of your reviewers for your lovely SKUA! Hopefully I attached this ...

Hello! Thank you for telling me this is up! Looks like it's been up for some time, and I haven't noticed. Sorry 'bout that. ^^; Grammar and First Impressions His ...

Lol, this made me laugh too. XD I bookmarked it and everything 'cause I love it so much. :lol: 11. Contractions aren't necessary and shouldn't be used unless you don't ...

We're...discussing. We're discussing whether we're protesting or donating. Yeah, that sounds good. :D ~ Jabber ~ *reads more*

Ooh! Can I be on the squad? *raises hand wildly* I wanna be the police dog! They're so cool! :D

Why am I ranked? I didn't review that much! Get me outta there! I really do have half a life, guys! :lol:

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I thought I would stop by and take a peek at what you've presented us! :D First, let me share our wonderful Eleven Commandments of YWS ...

Leaderboards? I'm in love. :shock: ~ Jabber ~

Hi again! I'm back from supper, so I shall type up this critique now! :D Sorry for the quick closure of the last critique. If you have any questions, you ...

My school doesn't have a writing club, so I don't have much advice to give. However, if you use YWS as a helpful source, you could probably suggest a few ...