JabberHut

It's all cool and spiffy and neat and fantabulous looking. It makes me happy. :D ~ Jabber ~

*bounces, hand raised* I can! I can! I can! :D ((Love you, Suz xD)) :D ~ Jabber ~

Hey, Lil' Sock! Grammar and First Impressions The sign read, “Paper Cut; [period instead] ” three tall individuals with pale skin and incredibly sharp teeth were drooling over the title ...

Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to Dreamer! Happy birthday to you! Awesomeness! :wink: ~ Jabber ~

Snoink! Ooh, more FREAK! ^_^ Unfortunately, I only read chapters 1-7 (if that's right)? So, we'll see how much help I'll be, haha. Lord, Snoink, you torture me. This is ...

Fand! For leveling me up to 15 in Sanctum, you sooo deserve this critique. You don't even know how many times I died trying to get to 15. You're my ...

Twist! My last double/triple/quadruple post! :D ‘Water jug, bed, window… For thruppence.’ For : With the object or purpose of Four : The number after 3 and before 5. :D ...

I do believe it's 'til anyway, despite all the arrows pointing to till when it comes to prose. It only makes sense to me that 'til be the correct form, ...

Yays for Demeter! I knew you were awesome! :wink: ~ Jabber ~

Twist! I feel kinda bad for double/triple/quadruple posting. Hopefully you won't bang on me for that (or any other mod for that matter)? :D It was warm, [no comma] with ...

Suz! Grammar and First Impressions Apart from the dust, the only things that occupied Nina’s basement were an old couch with bright-orange flower patterns, [no comma] and loneliness. You don't ...

Suz! Grammar and First Impressions Tuesday. Nina had youth group. Awesome-possum, right there. “Oh, nothin’. I made you somethin’ and I wasn’t sure I would find you or not , ...

Suz! Grammar and First Impressions The burnt red paint on the door was pealing like a flakey scab. Peal : A loud burst of noise Peel : To strip of ...

Twist! Thank you for clearing that up for me. :lol: This will be for the first part, then. You can find my overall comments at the end. :D Grammar and ...

Suz! Grammar and First Impressions No worries, I've been slacking way too much on the punctuation correction. :lol: So I kept walking because mom had come home drunk with a ...