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3B! Haha, I'm gonna crit! I'm critting your work! :P You know you love me. :wink: Grammar and First Impressions Brianne and Roger both gasped , and Jen was frozen. ...

Glad! It's been forever since I've read this. Hopefully what I comment on makes sense, and if it doesn't, shame on me. :P And because of that long crit you ...

My vote goes towards "Jabberwocky". As in, its actual name. Razz Otherwise -- Lewis Carroll. There can only be one Jabber around here. :P ~ Jabber~

Wow, thanks everyone! Pattycakes : I'm glad you liked it! The time is modern, but I mimicked Emma's dialogue with mine.. and I seem to be getting bagged for my ...

Hey, Ashley! Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. I was out of town the last week. But I'm here, and hopefully my critique will be as helpful as before, ...

Wow, it hasn't even been an hour? Cammie -- Thanks so much! I'm very happy you liked it. I'm hoping to continue this, so I'll try to let you know ...

Alright, this story's been redone so many times. Before this, it started as Finding Atlantis (in my portfolio). It wasn't going wonderfully, so I redid it. Hopefully, if this chapter ...

LOL! That was awesome. :lol: Jabber, the One and Only!

Haha! ...If you find singers are out of tune. ...If you pick up your instrument from the shop and hug it the entire ride home. ~ Jabber ~

Hello, 3B! I lied. I found time to get to this. HAH. You know you love me. :wink: Grammar and First Impressions Excuse any repeats of JFW's critique. I'm too ...

Hello again! Grammar and First Impressions Isaac cleans up our supplies, [no comma] and [s]washing[/s] washes off the counter. I feel his arm brush my pant leg , and I ...

Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to Jack! Happy birthday to you! *claps* Yays for Jacks! :D ~ Jabber ~

Brad! Paragraph Eins Grammar and First Impressions[/b] The first frost from winter was breathing through the city like a [?] disease. The cold stillness made the asphalt glitter black, [no ...

Hello again! Sorry for the wait. I had a few prior engagements to make. :D Grammar and First Impressions He wasn’t there on the walk to school , and now, ...

This is for JFW's contest. This was written at about midnight-ish, so it's rough. It meets the requirements for her contest (I'm pretty sure). I'd like a quick review over ...