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Re: Switch the Style
I must use the facilities as to relieve myself from this stressful burden. Can I use your pencil?
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Creep- Chapter 3
Hi, Connie! Sorry for the late review. The past few days have been... weird. If I explained it here, it would be worth 50 points and I wouldn't even have ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Excerpt from my NaNo
Hey, Kaila! Sorry I didn't get to this straight away. Yesterday was kind of a weird day for me. xD I did this during school, though, so hopefully this crit ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Switch the Style
I cannot help but turn my back on you for the events that have occurred between us. Do you have a tissue?
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Switch the Style
I forbid you to bother me further. Stop that cat!
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Switch the Style
The chill in the air crawls up and under my pale skin, sending shivers down my spine and through my body. Want some chocolate?
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Switch the Style
My throat is screaming for a delicious liquid to drench itself with. It's snowing outside!
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Switch the Style
Lead me into the depths of the night and I shall follow like a loyal dog would its master. Where are my keys?
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Switch the Style
I must take leave, for my beautiful chestnut mare is calling my name! I want a cookie.
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
Hey, Sky! =D Hmm... I'm going to claim this one as my own for about.. thirty minutes. Time: 12:27 PM. Grammar and First Impressions Jackie was highly aware of the ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: The Book Game!
"Tell me, what did you think of me before that day I gave you the note?" 1984 by George Orwell
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Creep- Chapter 2
Heya, Connie! :P Grammar and First Impressions Something scratched in the darkness. Creep strained his eyes, but in the dim light of the low bulbs , he couldn’t see anything ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: StoweAway [three]
Hi, Baer Boy! =D Round 3 little Teddiursa. Snort. Grammar and First Impressions “Your aunt and I have been looking for you for hours! Aly, tell us before you leave! ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Roses--Prologue & Ch. 1
Hello, Ashley! =D I finally did this right. I got the updated version. I'm catching up! Teehee. Plus, I do so much better critiques in Microsoft Word, so this worked ...
Dec 1, 2008 -
Re: Creep- Chapter 1
Hi, Connie! ^_^ I'll attempt to top Galerius' critique, but I doubt that'll happen. :lol: Grammar and First Impressions All in all, it was turning out to be a very ...
Dec 1, 2008
