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JabberHut

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  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi everyone?

    Hello! The name's JabberHut, but you can call me any variety of the name. If you check my blog in my profile, you'd see over 40 nicknames that some people ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello all :]

    Hiya! A knack for writing. That's uberly welcome around these parts. You picked the right place to post, my friend! In fact, because you said that you had a knack ...

    Jul 2, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Dreams Really Do Come True…Kinda

    Dreams Really Do Come True…Kinda “I’m so excited for this, Cally,” Lin said, admiring her new heavy-bound book. “ Fairytales: The Cliché . Everyone needs a cliché once in a ...

    Jun 21, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: This Night Is Ours

    This is for kamasgirl95's contest . Take it as you will. :P This Night Is Ours I curl to your warmth, and you hold me tight. My tenseness is eased ...

    Jun 18, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: Ashurbanipal-chapter 1 - part 1

    Back again! :D This time around, I'm going to give you a line-by-line with every piece of advice I can give alone with links to articles that I think you ...

    Jun 17, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Ashurbanipal

    Hello! Sorry it's so late. I kept getting distracted. XD So what I want to say has been pretty much said. I don't know what else I can do besides ...

    Jun 16, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: In Finitum

    Galeeerius! stampedes through the tenement - rickety huts - and ignores the shouts from the guards, Is that what you think of me? Rickety ? D: So I'm gonna make ...

    Jun 15, 2009
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Last Demon of Earth

    Hiya, Connie! I'm here after a gazillion years! :D So I'm with June in that it's hard critiquing a piece that seems great to me. XD Bear with me while ...

    Jun 15, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Runaway

    Hey there! I'm finally here. :D Okay, so I read this and I found it a good story. ^_^ However, it doesn't seem...poetic. I'll go over some points. I'll try ...

    May 31, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: You

    Hey, Shia! :D I'm glad to be of service here. I haven't reviewed lyrics in ages, and since my reviews have been kind of sad everywhere else, my review will ...

    May 31, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    We have the same eyes, Shay. O____O

    May 31, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: An Absence of Rose

    Hyello, Evi dearie! :D To answer your question in your request, your style seemed just fine! You had me hooked, you had me read more and more, you had me ...

    May 29, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Head of Gildabareth

    Connie! ^^ Sorry for the wait and brief ten-minute nap. XD It's nothing against you. The previous crit drained my eyes though. Haven't done this in a while! T.T First ...

    May 20, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Southern Fire

    Galeeerius! Oh, boy. Your pieces are always a challenge to review 'cause they're so different! But I'll give it the ol' college try. ^_^ It sounds like you were talking ...

    May 19, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Sachiko's 17th Birthday!!

    *has sleeping kitteh curled up in lap* Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to Sheik! Happy birthday to you! And I got it right this time. ...

    May 19, 2009


As ideas are always better than their execution, so too must dough taste better than cookies.
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