JabberHut

I'm back! Well, I could definitely follow the action much better in this chapter. Terrin sounds like the cool, calm, and collected bad guys that I love. I'm kind of ...

Hello again! Allow me to mention a possible grammar check again! It will help the reader understand so much better. (i.e. "definitely" and "defiantly" are two different words) Alright, so ...

Hello! The others mentioned grammar, so I won't do anything but emphasize it like I am now. Grammar. So! This was very short, sweet, and to the point. I think ...

Hello! Are you a poet? 'Cause I could detect some poetic descriptions and such throughout the narrative. Very cute. As is the entire story itself (until the end with the ...

Hiya, Teddy! I find this idea very cute! Especially Rudolph. He makes me smile. Every story needs a lovable character like Rudolph. (Though is it really legit to have pet ...

Hi there! This is such a sad story. Sweet and sad all the same. Poor Dad's losing family left and right here. First off, there's some major Point-of-view switching in ...

Hi there! This is a short, sweet, and to-the-point story. I like it! I wonder if you'll continue it? It'd be interesting to see what happens to her now that ...

Hello! Very interesting piece. I wasn't sure what you were doing with the hyphens for a while, and still I'm not sure what their purpose is. I thought maybe you ...

Galeeerius!

Ooh, I'll have to tell Sachiko about this. And Teague . Meshugenah too. And anyone else not named Nate . I think JabberHut would particularly have fun with it though.

I'll do it. Won't be able to start until December 14th, but I should be able to. After all, I used to write 100 reviews every week for months back ...

Yes. You don't have to technically be conscious of the fact that you're lying. Also, Pinocchio already knows about this lying thing with his nose, so he knows something's gonna ...

My third year on YWS! It's kind of cool knowing I've been around so long, and it's neat watching everyone grow up and improve in both writing and character. It ...

Hiya, Silent! I've read some very good poetry by you, so I was excited to read some more! Unfortunately, this didn't please me as much as other poems of yours. ...

Hi again! I'm not sure how the site would have messed up your grammar. Do you type this in Notepad or Microsoft Word? Perhaps another program? I don't see any ...