JabberHut

Hi! So, oh my gosh, this story totally has potential. Like... the ending was great, and I have an idea that could improve the story, let alone make the ending ...

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Hi there! I went ahead and read chapter 1 before coming here, so hopefully I didn't miss anything while reading. One huge problem I'm seeing is description. You have some, ...

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Ooh, I've never heard of this author. By the sounds of it though, I'd be rather interested. I've been reading or hearing about so many contemporary novels that a historical ...

Hello again! I saw this, and was like... Oh em gee, I know Elma! So I clicked, and here I am! It looks like we have ourselves a writing exercise, ...

Greetings! Forgive me for my lack of poetry knowledge. It's going to be odd critiquing a three-line poem constricted to only 17 syllables, haha. Your idea is very cute. I ...

Hi there! Now, I didn't read any of the chapters before this, so forgive me for missing any details you previously mentioned. ^^ This definitely moved almost too fast for ...

Hey, Mage! I finally got to seeing your magazine! It looks like you put a lot of work into this (and I know you did)! It turned out very well. ...

Hello! I'm not fantastic in reviewing lyrics, so forgive any nonsense that you may read. :D You have a very cool concept here! As usual, I wish I could hear ...

Hi! This was a very interesting little piece. In fact, I loved how you tied in the metaphor of writing throughout the whole thing. It really made my heart happy ...

Hi there! I like the idea you have here. You've got some good material, and I think it has plenty of potential! But one thing I'm terribly concerned about is ...

I'm back! So I found this chapter a bit better than the others. You took a bit more time in describing things, so bravo! I have a hard time believing ...

Hello! Very nice piece, and I loved some of the description you used. This is a great start to a novel that, by the sounds of it, could go pretty ...

Hello! This is a very well-written story. It would be interesting to continue if you did, but it's also a great stand-alone piece. The ending line seemed to be a ...