JaBurton

Like aaron and Micheal and stuff? Names don't make the time, especially in fantasy world and right now some of them are simply filler names until I can think of ...

Ahhhhhhhhh, understandable. Thanks!

Fantasy world, uncertain time period (roughly renaissance in technology, maybe less?).

Thanks, those punctuation mistakes will be my ruin. :)

"how and how not to care." That line was an I-don't know-what-to-put-here thing. :P The long third line in the "Moments are passed..." stanza is purposeful so that the final ...

The only way I could make it personal was by keeping it impersonal (if that makes any sense at all). Can you explain to me what you mean by playing ...

Thanks, I tend to write short versus and have written a couple with longer ones, but it'd difficult for me. Also, I read them aloud while I'm writing... I'm taking ...