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Re: The End Is A New Beginning
Okay I really liked this. No, I am not religious - in fact I see religion as the solution to the fear of death a mass of fool's desperately cling ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Virus irruption (extended)
Okay. First, "Eruption". Above reviewer's right, unless you intentionally misspelled the word for the sake of title appeal or something. Second, good job with this beginning. There were quite a ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows ~
Okay, I love good metaphors and I quite like this. I'm not going to put a lot of energy into nitpicking grammatical errors or identifying confusing imagery, because I'm tired ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Discontented
Hi Ashjoy. I'm going to first make the point that poetry and I have a bad history (see index, p.35), at least when it comes to appreciating structure and stanza ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Angel Chapter 1
Before I type anything, I'll mention that I do not know much about the conventions of romance as a genre. Aside from that, the premise is an interesting one - ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Zombie.0
Okay, I love zombie flicks, although I've never read a zombie paperback, but I like the human story that usually underlies the best of the "Zombie Apocalypse" plotlines. It may ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Solving for X
Well like an idiot i went and clicked on the spoiler button before i read the piece, but I still think there's enough for the reader to grasp who Dorian ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Freak
This poem, while i think it is lacking in technical flair in some respect, actually really impressed me. I felt what you were trying to evoke, to an extent, and ...
Jul 22, 2011
