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Re: The Fading - Chapter One
Hey there! Just finished reading your work, here's my review: ~ You have a knack for building up an atmosphere, and your description of the wrecked kitchen was exquisite ~ ...
Jun 14, 2013 -
Re: Reminiscence - the novel (Part One)
Aria! JOV here for a quick review - this is the first piece of yours I've read and I'm blown away by it. At the beginning in particular, your use ...
Feb 25, 2013 -
Re: Working Title: Withering
Hello CourtlynJ! A great piece, but of course, this is a review, so I must be at least a little bit critical! Let's start with what worked well: I think ...
Jan 16, 2013 -
Re: The Girl and the Coffee Shop; chapter 1.5
A very interesting excerpt, Dreamwalker. The style is very distinctive, and the characters intriguing. Here are some things I noted: 1) Overlong, but beautiful, description I can see that the ...
Aug 21, 2012