JMSmith

Snow is great in moderation. I love snow but we have had a TON of it around here and now its all sandy and gross. =/ I like new fallen ...

The body is drawn really good, but Cupid's angle is a little awkward. The hand isn't actually gripping the arrow, the arrow is more floating behind it but maybe that's ...

Have his/her (I'll call it "his") instructor have him meditate. Make the MC become aware of more than just the physical evidense of a being, but more the mind and ...

You ever think of something, like a growing power? I don't know how to describe it but maybe he can take leftover energy from things and project it into other ...

Sometimes just skipping to the part you WANT to write really helps. I've heard alot of authors say that, and have used the tip before so I know from experience ...

Ugh. Tough way to start but welcome! I'm also very new here, but I can tell you that anything that the people above me haven't explained, can be told in ...

Hello! I'm also pretty new here so, know that you are not alone in your struggle. ;) I am a fellow Twilight/Harry Potter fan so you and I will probabaly ...

Wow. It's very difficult, for me at least, to write a poem like a story and keep it with correct syllables and rhymes which you did pretty well. I noticed ...

Uh, Hello! I'm very new to the site, I think I have been a member for about 45 seconds so I can't really say much yet but I intend to ...