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Wow. I'm impressed. Very, very nice description. Very, very nice everything. I do, however, have one commment to make: In fact, I look at them like they’re the luckiest people ...

Well, welcome to YWS first off. Not bad, not bad at all! One of the only parts of the story I didn't like was simply the fact that it was ...

I want the world to go away. The bustling cities, The quiet woodlands, From the deafening to the silent. All the smells, All the tastes, All the feelings. I want ...

I really liked this a lot. The subject matter was interesting in and of itself, and it was truly written well. (If only people like you were in my english ...

Well, [insert name here], I was entering this into a contest that allowed only 250ish words maximum. But I was thinking I might do some kind of continuation of this ...

Hi there! This is an entry into the Flash Fiction contest, by tnme22. A scruffy man in plaid golf shorts and a tweed coat sat down on the streetcorner, looking ...

Hey, Kate! First off, I really like this. You've got some good quality writing here. My only comment is that the characters thoughts don't really sound like her. If she's ...

Co-written with my buddy magnusbanefan13. For those of you who reviewed the first, non-edited version of this we thank you! You've been a big help in our revision process (seeing ...

It's really funny exactly how seamless this is. I can't even tell who wrote what. Scary, actually. The only thing that I can think of now (because we've revised this ...

A rival lord had beaten her until her bones cracked and splintered, piercing through her bruised flesh like serrated fangs through diseased gums. I like the sentence, but I think ...

The old man awoke with a small gasp. His bedclothes clung to his skin with sweat, the outline of his body heaving in shallow, wheezing breaths that rattled through his ...

Well, this story is all well and fine, but I think you should write more romance. Why doesn't the librarian fall head over heels for this devilishly charming young ink ...

"The rest of the class had noticed this, and were busy making paper aeroplanes, passing notes of their own, and basically not listening to a word that was being said ...