JFW1415

Writing, like most things, is amazing to give tips on for one main reason: it's easier said than done. I can rant to someone for *hours* about character realism. Can ...

Ditto what Gahks said. Anyways, I'm not sure, but doesn't it have a lot of protection? Meaning they wouldn't let someone crash into it? I'm not entirely sure, but I'd ...

Check out the usergroups. Namely La Plume and Character Development. ~JFW1415

Heehee... I can ramble on this for quite a while! Before you even start an action scene, you need to set it up. Who wants to be in the middle ...

Eh, I'm not much help here, but I did read a book with the main character becoming blind. A fire cracker went off in front of his eyes. When they ...

I have to add this: don't use too many cliffhangers. Us readers need a break once in a while! Anyways, I'll echo the repetition thing. That really works. The whole: ...

I have a question. One of the moderators told me I shouldn't write in school because then, I won't have anything to write about. She said I should just observe ...

*Poke* Isn't this the third time this has been posted...? ~JFW1415

Haha, you guys kind of missed the point. :wink: You're supposed to come up with a few of your absolute favorite names. Otherwise we might as well go on any ...

Haha, that's a good tip. Another reason why it's good to have others look at your work. If you thought you were correct, the critiquer will point it out for ...

37. Cuss often and for no reason and rate it G. The more vulgar the better. ~JFW1415

Can you ask multiple reviewers at once to critique your story? I just did this with four or five people, and I'm afraid I might get in trouble.. I'm paranoid.. ...

*Poke* Shouldn't this be in Writer's Corner? Also, as I haven't read your story, I have no idea. Maybe try these: - Put it away and work on something else. ...

But yeah. For that, bre adventurous! Are we trying to kill me? XD Haha, poor Jabbs. *Hugs* Anyways, I'm a strong believer in this. One word sentences, or paragraphs? So ...

I have a book that I love, but I'm too lazy to go find it and tell you about it. Maybe later? But I love podcasts. Go on iTunes, and ...