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Last night, my dad and I came up with a good idea. These might just be marketable at the next Comicon. Tell me, if these were done a little better, ...

I second all above opinions. :wink: But you have experienced a lot - the emotions, at least. If you've lost a grandparent but not a brother, just bring back that ...

Sorry in advance if I repeat any! -'A pessimist sees the difficulty in every opportunity. An optimist sees the opportunity in every difficulty.' Winston Churchill. -'Never let the fear of ...

"My father paces the floor" gets you out of the "is" issue. Heehee...Yeah, that works too. *Hides behind migraine* It ain't my fault! I mean, innt! I mean...I mean...oh, never ...

The first one is correct, I think. (My father's pacing.) Fathers would be more than one father. Father's pacing does look kind of like the pacing belongs to father instead ...

I just finished I am the Messanger, by Markus Zusak. (It's only The Messanger in Australia.) It was amazing. He has a completly different writing style, which I'm currently experimenting ...

Remember, as I write this, I have a (mild) migraine. It's mainly gone now, but my head still hurts, so that may be why I'm having such a stupid moment. ...

Woah, that's a LOT. My favorites? 'Beautiful Diaster' and 'There's Always Room For Photoshop.' One suggestion: Get rid of the hose in the one of your flower. It takes away ...

LOL, when I write about a perfect character, I write about myself. ;) Nice, Snoink. :roll: I absolutely despise perfect characters, and don't see why anyone would like to write ...

Hello, my name is Matthew, and I told a girl to run away. ~JFW1415

I love them! Especially with the plain background. How about depressed? :wink: ~JFW1415

I love it! I'd just like to add that (in the bigger version) she looks a little cross eyed. Amazing job! ~JFW1415

Sometimes when you do something stupid, or you find out something that really surprised you, or you get really angry, you aren't going to be eloquent, you're going to swear ...

So far, I've never written a novel length book, so I'm not sure about what Azila said. However, with my short stories, I always start with past. Usually they stay ...

Lately I've read a lot of stories written by teens where they have swears in the narrative often. What do you guys think of this? I don't mind swearing in ...