JFW1415

LOL ! the specks are snowflakes !! it was snowing :D I agree, im glad the snow is gone too: bring on the summer !! :D XxxDo But...there are brown ...

My friend who is a decent writer uses swear words, but only for three characters in her ongoing story. I role-play with a different real-life friend and one of my ...

Brian. A mean teacher. (Last name, please.) ~JFW1415

I'm a bit late, aren't I? :lol: I also agree that you need to focus. I would say only the trees, or the trees and the sign. The other things ...

I really liked it! Just watch the lower lip – I thought the tongue was a lip at first. ;P Also, the shelf next to him, and the shading below ...

Heads up: I'm no artist. :wink: 1. No comment...I think it's cool. *Shrug* 2. It took me a while to figure out what pose it was in. Watch the position ...

Actually, I just wrote a story with three main characters. Two never swore. One did 11 times. :lol: I agree; it's all about the character and where you put it ...

I love the first one, but maybe try to make the eyes pop a bit more? Darker or lighter - something to make them completely stick out? (My friend actually ...

The only thing based off of the show is the powers/abilities the characters use and one of the enemies. Still, if you even doubt this, I would change it. The ...

I know you've read the 'where does my piece go,' but you didn't say if you had found an answer, so I'll try to help. If you based your ideas ...

Thanks JFW, these are your stories about the girl with Matty as her brother? I've been wanting to know where you've been getting the prompts for ages! If you asked ...

Being critical of your work is, in my opinion, actually damaging to your work. It doesn't help at all when you've got an inner editor hovering over your shoulder while ...

Go here: I'm doing that right now. It's on LJ, and you write 100 short stories around one or two main characters. It really helps with character development. I'm too ...

No clue. My family and I don't save papers. :shock: I know that my 5th grade teacher made to show several pages of a story and a lot of pages ...

Proper grammar/capitalization, please. :wink: I always am critical of my own work, but I think that's a good thing. We don't lecture you for hours on your writing for you ...