JFW1415

Cliches: Basic things that happen in life. Girl deals with horrible, alcoholic father. Girl likes boy, boy hates girl, girl hates boy, boy likes girl. Mom and daughter are insanely ...

I agree with King, though most of the words here should still be used in moderation. I just can't stand 'suddenly,' though. (Oh, and eyes can sparkle when you cry. ...

I personally like using line breaks here. Like this: ----- It shows that you're either switching POV or changing the time. As long as you show that time has elapsed ...

Icaruss is definitely right. However, you still need to be careful. Make the characters sound real, but reading: "Oh my god, he's like, so totally cute, and I like, totally ...

In relation to what Adam said, there's a really awesome quote: Statistics show that 58% of our language is body language. 37% is paralanguage (tone of voice.) That leaves only ...

Really, I don't do much other than grammar and spelling. The rest is up to people to advise you on. To a point, yes. Right now, I've been lectured about ...

I actually just finished Flatland. It's really interesting, but very different. I highly recommend it to all those who enjoy a slow read that makes you think. Now I'm on ...

I would definately read the back cover. It sounds like it's about a woman, probably mid-twenties and single, who has had a lot of troubles - probably lot's of recent ...

I loved it! It's so simple, the items so perfect. Maybe rearrange the flower? Right now the stem is falling off a bit, and it's bothering me. Also, I think ...

Unless you're the sadistic type who love to feel their pain... Haha, that describes me perfectly. :roll: Anyway, great tip. I personally can't make character charts - I do this ...

I really like it! And the title made me smile. :) The girl's hand needs a bit of work. Right now, it looks like it's top up, not palm up. ...

I hate the books. They're addicting, so I read them, but I tried rereading it once - awful. Same thing happened to me with Harry Potter. Amazing characters, awesome plot, ...

He swears. A lot. And carries a freakin' baseball everywhere. -Matthew He's a total pushover, man. -Justin What do you do when nobody's watching? ~JFW1415

Ahh! I bought this! I'm just way too lazy to finish it, and lost the tug thingy... Haha, now people know that there was a key telling you where to ...

JFW: Sometimes harsh words are the best fit for harsh situations, no? Perhaps you have not merely encountered a situation that you deem it necessary to use anything else. Another ...