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Here's the revised version of He's Just Human , with a new title. Currently being edited.

"My father paces the floor" gets you out of the "is" issue. Heehee...Yeah, that works too. *Hides behind migraine* It ain't my fault! I mean, innt! I mean...I mean...oh, never ...

The first one is correct, I think. (My father's pacing.) Fathers would be more than one father. Father's pacing does look kind of like the pacing belongs to father instead ...

I just finished I am the Messanger, by Markus Zusak. (It's only The Messanger in Australia.) It was amazing. He has a completly different writing style, which I'm currently experimenting ...

Remember, as I write this, I have a (mild) migraine. It's mainly gone now, but my head still hurts, so that may be why I'm having such a stupid moment. ...

Woah, that's a LOT. My favorites? 'Beautiful Diaster' and 'There's Always Room For Photoshop.' One suggestion: Get rid of the hose in the one of your flower. It takes away ...

What's Til/Tilly? And yes, this should be the poll of the week. ;P ~JFW1415

Banned for banning yourself. ~JFW1415

To love, to feel, to feel the joy in living. I believe the point of life it to seek happiness. The little moments in life where you take a step ...

Awesome. ;P This site is soooo big... ~JFW1415

I'm excited. I just wrote something for school (roughly 4,000 words,) and it doesn't look like it will take too long to edit. I did the tense corrections (it's present, ...

Hopefully I'll be able to give you a better critique at some point, but I just wanted to mention something. I don't think any doctor will ever say 'you have ...

Ice cream. ~JFW1415

Maybe something writing related...? Sorry, I'm not much help. :oops: ~JFW1415

5/10 whats your logic? The world shall never know... :lol: 5/10 I don't get the phone call thing... ~JFW1415