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Re: A Revelation
I agree - this should be in short fiction. You did make me think, I'll give you that. But there's no story behind this - no real meaning. It's just ...
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Re: Storybook Approval System?
I love this idea. It's getting ridiculous. Right now, there are several storybooks with the exact same plot (the end of the world.) Also, we have more and more people ...
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Re: A lover, A mother, A child
the point of the contest it that u have 10 minutes 2 live I know, I just think that these instances are unrealistic. ~JFW1415
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Re: Waiting Rooms
I've only been in a few, and a long time ago. I need to know everything about waiting rooms. All the details that will make my writing better. I don't ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Comments Sought On YWS
Nate, you're crazy. This site is amazing - have you seen the text on here? *Hugs font* I love it! One suggestion, though: is there any way you could add ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Promises Not Kept (Part Two of Three)
Azila: I keep doing the beginning with a pronoun thing! URGH! I hate it. :( Anyways, yes, it's the same family as my 100 stories, but only because I'm lazy. ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
I'd love one on my new story! It's three parts, and here are the two I have up: Part One: Part Two: Do whatever you can! Thanks a million! (And ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Yoyo's Crit Requests
Hello! You asked to know when part two of He's Just Human came out, and I just posted it here: It's not as good, so I need all the critiques ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Promises Not Kept (Part Two of Three)
Here's the revised version of He's Just Human , with a new title. Currently being edited.
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Crit Pit
*Poke* If you have time? :smt112 (Come on, you know you want to! I gave you an awesome smilie! ;P) Thanks! ~JFW1415
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Story Plans
I've only written a plan for a story once, the one I'm writing now. But this one seems to be the best because I actually know where I'm headed not ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Bad Girls Need Love Too
Hello! The numbers next to the highlighted part correspond with the 'highlighted comments' below. NOTE: The last sentence is comment number 25. It was the only sentence on the third ...
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Re: Rain Drop
Well, considering the fact that I first thought this was about skydivers, not raindrops, I'm not sure hoe much you should trust me. But you asked, so I'll deliver. gyrating ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Panic
I'm baaack! Be afraid. :wink: One and two down the first column, three and four down the second. Highlighted Comments 1. If something’s wrong, we should be upset, no? So ...
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Re: School aka Prison
Um, guys? Do you realize that this was posted four years ago? Whoever wrote this will be around 14 now - a much better writer. ~JFW1415
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