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Re: Pep For Poets
Night Walker *hands over milk and cookies* Let me know if I can return the favor? Since I've been trying to write poetry lately, I definitely should try critiquing it ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Night Walker
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Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Check Your Statistics!
16 reviews in the last 90 days? O.o Add a zero to that and that will be what it will be at the end of the summer. =] ~JFW1415
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: For all the college math geeks out there...
Thank you! That really helps. I just wanted a little idea of what the normal path is. I'm taking AP Statistics junior year, and AP Calculus senior year, so hopefully ...
Jun 2, 2009 -
Re: For all the college math geeks out there...
So, I was wondering what the progression of math classes are. My brother is picking out classes for freshman year in college right now, and the only options are like, ...
Jun 1, 2009 -
Re: W.A.S.A.R
Just a note about the credibility thing, as I'm too tired to write a full review. Writing about Leroy Island is fine. Harry Potter lives at 4 Private Drive, right? ...
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Little Smiles
The horses all whinnied as I entered and left the barn today. I still smell like horse.
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Little Smiles
In an assembly today, I sat in front of him, and was required to turn around often so I saw him a lot. I also caught him staring many times. ...
May 21, 2009 -
Re: Little Smiles
I worked with him today for a science lab. It was going to be him, another guy, and me, but the other guy had a baseball game and left early. ...
May 20, 2009 -
Re: into the cracks of the earth
If you have a problem with going about that, I suggest working specifically on the 'cracks of the earth' part first. It is, after all, the title of this piece. ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Make Music happy. Give her something to review!
Nightly Terrors A short flash (about 500 words) about a girl with anxiety. Slightly disturbing/sad/scary (I've been told), so it's fine if you want to pass. Thanks so much! ~JFW1415
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Pig Droppings [Closed]
I love you? =] Title: A Jigsaw Heart Genre: Dramatic Poetry Link: Here I know you're extremely good at wording and hidden meanings in poetry, which I epically fail at, ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Critique Shop of Horrors
Nightly Terrors I know it needs improving, but I would love a thorough critique. I have some idea of what to do, but I still need a little more help. ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Will Review Anything!!
into the cracks of the earth A Jigsaw Heart Both poems, so it shouldn't take too long. Thanks so much! ~JFW1415
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Little Smiles
Jiggity got it right - YWS is becoming a very dreary place. Browse the blogs and the majority of the emoticons are fed up with life, very sad, scared, etc. ...
May 18, 2009
