JFW1415

Nit-Picks I ran away from home when leaves were hanging to trees by their last vein. Actually, it was more like walking away from home, because I look stupid when ...

The promised critique, part two! Nit-Picks This made me happy because I was doing something to help Leo. I'd ditch this. I personally can't stand it when he tells us ...

The promised critique is finally here! Nit-Picks It took me two years to become a postman. To pass the test I had to carry a seventy pound bag of mail ...

WHY DON'T WE SCRAP 'TIL/TILL, STOP BEING LAZY BUGGERS, AND JUST WRITE 'UNTIL'?? 'Cause in first person we need to have a specific voice, as we do with dialogue? ~JFW1415

Edited 6/30/08 For Cal's romance contest. Smiling's A Good Start 040: Lake Amber stares straight out at the lake in front of her. The water is still, a faded green ...

Perhaps I've merely misunderstood what this thread is all about (and if I have please inform me.) but I've always thought that when you're writing something it was best to ...

JFW, are you happy now? :) Oh, of course, not, I'm still above you! Mwahahahahahahahhahaahahahahahaha! :D Mwahaha. Si, but I'm working on SKUA. So there. (And I have to give ...

Audy: No, IE doesn't do that. It's my favorite part about Firefox. And the spellcheck. And the tabs. In short, Firefox = life. Thanks for making me switch, Nate. :) ...

You don't have to, but it's unlikely anyone will read it if it's in the other forums. Then again, you can request reviews in 'Will Review For Food,' and they'll ...

Listen to the others. In the mean time, try writing short stories. It feels great to finish a piece of writing, and maybe that's what you need? If you've been ...

When I click the link for the 101 Tips on Writing, I come to the 404 cartoon. *Cries* I want my list... Firefox, 8:34, GMT-4 ~JFW1415

*Takes a deep breath, then starts screaming* YAY! Go Dem! Go Dem! Go Dem! *Is done* Congrats, Dem. :) ~JFW1415

(This is in regards to the shortened version of 'until.') Well, I have recently been informed by the amazing Jabbster that 'til is no longer grammatically correct. That is simply ...

7/10 Awww... It shouldn't be. :) ~JFW1415

Writing, like most things, is amazing to give tips on for one main reason: it's easier said than done. I can rant to someone for *hours* about character realism. Can ...