JFW1415

*Hides* Do not kill me! ~JFW1415

Haha, this is *amazing.* ~JFW1415

Perhaps I've merely misunderstood what this thread is all about (and if I have please inform me.) but I've always thought that when you're writing something it was best to ...

Hello, Mr. Bear! Your fiance shall be your critiquer today. :) Nit-Picks I mean, if grown men had no hair under their armpits, they would be incomplete. We were discussing ...

Happy birthday Jack! I hope you have an amazing day! ~JFW1415

(Shh! It's all part of her diabolical plan to have the most posts on YWS!) Eh. If you can't beat 'em, join 'em? :smt024 Up there's what I *cough*all of ...

'Tis wonderful! Thanks for the notice, Nate. :) ~JFW1415

JFW, that's most likely 'cause a mod got to it -- it was gone when I went to approve CIA. Speaking of! Either another mod confirmed it when I did, ...

I'm in. Suz is just lame-o. :) *Secretly hugs Suz and shuns Snoink* ~JFW1415

Sorry to bother you, but I was trying to submit a group and it asked me to accept another one. Now, I'm not a mod, so I doubt that's supposed ...

Suz, my flail buddy! *Grin* So, I've been hearing 'bout this story for ages, and I just got to read it. I'm impressed, my friend, and I want to see ...

Duuude. I told you there was a reason I didn't critique poetry. Poetry disguised as prose doesn't make it any better. :) Anyways, the one critique I actually could notice ...

Nit-Picks She started down the first step, with her hand in the air, searching for the railing. Just the way she took the first step, I could see the faith ...

Nit-Picks Lucy, the devil worshiper, was sitting next to me. “So, I was at the graveyard last night,” like almost all her stories started, “and this thing, it was like ...

Nit-Picks “Oh, shucks.” She giggled. “If I didn’t warsh the floor every Monday it wouldn’t look like that, trust me.” Wouldn't you need to wash it even more than that ...