JFW1415

Will you critique something for your fiance? Out of Focus You know you love me, darlin'. :) ~JFW1415

*Poke* Out of Focus It's short, in contrast to my last piece. But before you do so... apply to be an instructor! Please? You're an amazing critiquer, which is why ...

'cause you love me more than life itself? 'cause you're getting an insanely detailed critique from me for entering my contest? (Seriously - I've already critiqued it. I'm just waiting ...

It's physically impossible for me not to ask for one from the amazingness that is Sam. Out of Focus Thanks so much! And I shall critique your stuff for my ...

You keep asking for something, so here you go! And it's nice and short! Out of Focus Thanks! I'll get to your stuff shortly, m'dear. :) ~JFW1415

*Poke* You're tough, but that's what I need. I may just avoid you when I read the critique, though. ;) Out of Focus Thanks so much! ~JFW1415 EDIT: That's now ...

I actually have a story that has description! Like, your level of description! And that I think needs more! *Gasp* 'tis a historical moment right here. Anyways, I think you'll ...

Ali, you know you love me. ;) Out of Focus ~JFW1415

This has been edited. I mainly used Icaruss's critique, and I ended up taking out the girl's death scene. So, two questions for all of you: 1) I want the ...

Known for being LLS and bugging me about extending my contest. ;) ~JFW1415

*Poke* Anne Rice = amazing. Stephen King? Never read his. I can't stand Stephanie Meyer. ~JFW1415

*Poke* If you're begging ... Suicide Kills Us All (It's a very light 'R.' Just a few swears and slutty girls saying that they love Connor.) I know it needs ...

Eh, Jare and I got engaged... nothing else comes to mind. :) Just check out blogs - they tell all. :) ~JFW1415

No offense to your friends, Muse, but you're definitely the prettiest one there. :) ~JFW1415

Si, I do. My mom made me get one about two years ago, when I started working summers at the barn. I would usually stay until 8 PM, and most ...