JFW1415

JFW = You're a harsh but amazing reviewer (just what I need!) There is an awful lot of telling, I see that now - but I don't think I'm gonna ...

Happy Birthday, Jabber!!!!!!! Happy Birthday, Suzanne!!!!!!!! I love you guys! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant:

Ooers! Ooers! Do a horse! Please? *Is thoroughly unhelpful and art-challenged, but when she saw the 'request,' she couldn't resist. Normally she would just 'ooooh' and 'awwww' inside her head. ...

Hey, Jare, I have a new deal for you. I'll count the fat boy critique as 1/2, and this as 1/2, and dirt as 1. So you have one left, ...

Heads up: I've done a few pages so far, but it's looooong so I'll do a little each day until it gets done. ~JFW1415

All caught up except for doing more of Gypsie Eyes for gryf and a 55 page story for niccy_v that I'm doing a little at a time. Any others? ~JFW1415

I did read (and critique) And All This But Mere Perceptions, and then I skimmed it just now, but if I forget anything please don't yell? The promised (late) critique. ...

Well, I'm being a loser and only doing an overall, 'kay? XD Besides, others got the nit-picks, and I've critiqued waaay too much today for my own good. XD Thoughts ...

Nit-Picks [s]And Natasha Bryvlinski was her guiding light, her badgering encouragement. The two of them had been friends since they entered middle school and realized in homeroom that they had ...

Nit-Picks So then , I'd ditch this comma. “I’ll be right there!” Suzan screeched You just used this and it's way too annoying to use twice. Try 'called,' or 'called ...

Nit-Picks I was in the school library, right, What's the point of the 'right?' I [s]see [/s] saw so I [s]was [/s]watched her. Brianna didn’t know what to do. How's ...

Before I Read Hey Sam! Here's the first critique for winning my Side Characters Contest. Honestly, this should be counted as four, since you sent me the new version with ...

O.o The whole thing or just the title? And apparently you have the whole IP address attached, so that's kind of copyrighting it? Hmm. Just don't post anything you want ...

Wherever my computer is. XD I can't write by hand. ~JFW1415

No clue, but you should save your files on to a disc just in case. XD ~JFW1415