JFW1415

*Bows down* I am not worthy... I am not worthy... I am not worthy... Now how 'bout we get that 'mazing critiquing skills over to my stories, eh? ;) ~JFW1415

It has, but then again, it has before. We'll adjust. Change is awful in real life, too, but I think this change will be better for us. For now, we ...

Not a promised critique, but I figured I'd read this part, too. She’s never been in a house before. You need to make it more obvious that she lives in ...

The promised critique: Helen went all the way to Galway to the clothes bank and found her some things. Tam doesn’t much like dressing up, but she lets Mam this ...

Here comes the promised critique: He turned and kicked his computer, hard. That couldn’t do it or anything else any good, but it felt good to him. He was frustrated. ...

I actually had a some-what social weekend! On Friday I went to the barn from 7 AM to 5:30 PM as usual, but went to Jess's with Precia and Jess ...

This thread is currently closed so I can catch up. If you're amazing and give me thousands of critiques on my work (like Sam!) then feel free to still ask ...

This is pretty disappointing. I hate to say it, but this seems very reactionary. I've never liked the idea of taking something away from everyone because of the actions of ...

Whenever I need something like this, I pretend I am them. They lost their brother? BAM - John's dead in my head. They're dying? BAM - I just got diagnosed ...

PSHH. I loved those things! True, I got mine on Easter... it died... the same day? And then the Burger King ones weren't the same. But... *sigh* Furbies... And how ...

Nit-Picks The last time I saw Duncan before the accident was the night of our father's arrest. Duncan had fought with me about [s]dad's [/s] Dad's case[s],[/s] ; he didn't ...

Nit-Picks My mind won’t leave me alone! Ditch that exclamation point. I’ll give every happy thought, every happy moment I ever had before that day. All you give me is ...

Hello! Overall Comments I'm not going to give you a nit-pick, because you can easily catch any mistakes you made and nothing jumped out at me. So! First things first. ...

Okay, so I was talking to Sade, and I told him to pick a number between one and eight. He chose seven, which meant I was going to critique science-fiction. ...

It's okay...I don't know...I just am really disappointed with myself at this point. I thought I had a really good idea and it just keeps coming out crappy! I have ...