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Re: Lose the Game!
I. Hate. You. XD In the most loving way possible, of course. ;) ~JFW1415
Aug 9, 2008 -
Re: Gypsie Eyes: prologue and chapter one
Hey, gryf. I'm finally getting around to critiquing the future chapters, and I saw that this was editing. I figured I'd take another look, and hopefully actually be some help ...
Aug 8, 2008 -
Re: Casting Shadows Prologue [Edited.]
Here's your critique for entering CIA's grammar contest. Jabbs will give you one shortly. So, I'm a lazy-bum, okay? I'm too lazy to do nit-picks here. So open up that ...
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: Du Og Meg
Here's your critique for entering CIA's grammar contest. Nit-picks are attached 'cause I'm a lazy bum. XD Hmm... actually, this isn't gonna count as a critique, is it? But it ...
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: Night Terrors
A critique for entering the grammar contest for CIA. Before I Read Hey Jare! I'm sooo psyched to be reading this! I've been waiting for AGES. XD If I say ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Out of Focus It's a revised version, and I tried my best to incorporate all that you said, but I would love for you to take another look. Make sure ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: The Critique Hut
*Poke* Just so you know, Out of Focus has been strongly edited, so I'd LOVE a critique on that one. *Points to post up above* Anyways, the rest have been ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Red Line Reviews
An extremely edited version: Out of Focus Be harsh? Thanks so much! Let me know when I can return the favor. ~JFW1415
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: The Doctor Is In
*Poke* Edited version of Out of Focus. Slay it? Thanks so much! PM me to return the favor. (Actually, I owe you six critiques... XXD) ~JFW1415
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: The Jigster Cometh Bearing Gifts And Bombs
*Cowers slightly* Out of Focus It's been VERY strongly edited, and I would love your opinion on it? And I'm not going to remember to review your work, so can ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Need Mucho Reviews
Out of Focus You know you love me. XXD So be harsh? Please? XXD ~JFW1415
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Out of Focus [Edited 8/29/08]
This has been thoroughly edited. I would love all feedback you could give me, as I tried my best to incorperate everything you guys said. (I had the most trouble ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: What do you have difficulty writing?
Tenses. Those God-awful things should be run down into the ground, then reverse on the Mac Truck, and He Ho, straight forward ahead, peddle to the metal. Kill! Kill! Kill! ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: August's Greeter of the Month: Alainna!
Congratulations! *Hugs* ~JFW1415
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: I'm New...
So Jared wanted me to join the site because he says I write good Just so you know, I'm now shunning you. Welcome to the site! I take some getting ...
Aug 5, 2008