JFW1415

Hello! I haven't reviewed in ages - I never even noticed the site was down - but I saw this, read it, and felt like making a few small comments. ...

Banned for being irrationally obsessed with pigs.

I've spotted the rare and elusive creature known as Prokaryote. Best be quiet now - we mustn't frighten him. [i still

What do you think the most amazing book here is? Need a hint? Not there yet? Are you almost there??? YAY! You found it! WHAT?!?!?!? That's not it!!! That's it!

That's not terrible writing, because it's not writing. It's telling you what his story is about. I'm assuming his question was is it enough to fill a whole novel, or ...

I love your lawyer on it. =] ~JFW1415

guess what? I'll actually be here. And I'll call in! [look for my area code missy ;-)] ~JFW1415

I can't decide! I like the friendliness of the blue, and don't like the blue header on the black, but love the bottom thing on the black, and... ah! Combine ...

I like the second one better - more 3-D, more futuristic. ~JFW1415

New version = 9999999999999999999999999999999999999999x better. Understatement of the year. It's sooooo bad! XD well duh. there's no daniel. add him and it'll be fine. ;-]

... What? New version = 9999999999999999999999999999999999999999x better. And Sadie > Melissa. [though I may be biased - I don't like anything without Daniel.]

*claims tub and sends Firestarter to go light the fire.* ~JFW1415

Two additional comments snagged from the little question marks links... "The featured member is chosen by Incandescence every two weeks. In determining the featured member, a number of factors are ...

Me? I'd go on a massive shopping trip with $1,000 and save the rest. =] Is college free there? Since it's grades 9-13...? If so, spend it on a car? ...

Prefaces are almost never needed. Unless you're planning on switching POV or jumping forward or backward in time significantly, make this chapter one. This is pretty good, but you need ...