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For KailaMarie's Perspective contest. Well, this one's a little... strange. You know how everyone seems to be doing fancy writing things on YWS lately? Well, they are. xD So when ...

This is for clograbby's Lost In The Atmosphere contest. The picture I used follows. This has been edited completely. Any more comments? Rooftop Conversations "Hey," Colin whispers behind her, his ...

I actually end up getting bored easily. After a few weeks I'll switch fonts or colors. xD And I hate the fancy ones - you can hardly read them. *Stabs ...

The promised critique: Overall Comments You know I love you, Ally. So... don't kill me for this? Think More TV Show Take a look at this: She set the timer ...

Errr... or I'm just that bored? Anyways, I was looking though (*cough*stalking*cough*) the Novelists usergroup, and I saw a post where they discussed fonts they liked to use. But since ...

I have until the 27th off, so I'll definitely be doing this! *Looks at Will Review For Food Thread with 57 stories to critique* Apparently a lot of them... xD ...

The promised critique: A Few Nit-Picks, But Not Many As I Skimmed Finding none, he mumbled , "[s]a[/s] A ll right, I believe you." It’s the best one around, Semi-colon ...

The promised critique: Nit-Picks It was a thing that she had dearly bought, though not with money. Thing? Ew. Find a different word. She stopped. She found the phrase that ...

*Boogies* You know I love you, Snoink, and I'm super excited to read this. XD I already read the first part, up to 'looks like', and I looove it! *Glee* ...

The promised critique: Nit-Picks He really should not be at that place. Should be: 'He really should not have been at that place.' At his age boys do not care ...

The promised critique: Overall Comments Hmm… it's not your best work, Con. And you made the same mistakes over and over again, so I think an overall would benefit you ...

The promised critique: Nit-Picks We get so lonely anymore. Grammar mistake – I can't fix it 'cause I don't know what you meant, but look at it. within it. Then, ...

I'm back, as promised. xD Nit-Picks The dry branches were shaken, softly, I'd ditch those two commas – they slow us down too much. crumpled, I'd ditch that comma for ...

Hey ProfessorRabbit! Thanks so much for entering the CIA contest. Yours was a very nice read, and definitely original. However, I'm a lazy bum. So I'm gonna put this in ...

Well... they're not all really writing? But please answer? XD 1. Reading: When told to read a novel in school, what type of note taking do you think is needed? ...