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Re: Edit during or after?
I always want to edit as I go alone, but I try not to. Typically I force out a first draft - whether by a word war when I'm stuck ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Emotion
Awesome advice thanks a ton. I know i should start on smaller things first, but Im impatient so when I get these ideas in my head I want to get ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Conversations
Well. I have no idea why this was dug up, it's sort of embarrassing. Although I do kinda like it, it's not really good and JFW pretty much summed it ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Conversations
Well, this was definitely unique Icaruss, which is why I love your writing so much. Every time I read it it's something different. It's really fun to read, since the ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: All There Is [Edited 8/30/08]
I love this piece, I had to read it a few times to get everything, and even still I think there are more layers waiting for me. I think Black ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Red Line Reviews
All There Is Let's see how much you kill something that isn't as edited as my previous story. xD Thanks so much! ~JFW1415
Aug 23, 2008 -
Re: Hauntings - A Critique Shop
All There Is Other Fiction Line by line. 1,792 words. Thank you so much! Let me know when I can return the favor. ~JFW1415
Aug 23, 2008 -
Re: All There Is [Edited 8/30/08]
Note: Many of you will find this disturbing as pretty much the entire story is about self injurers. Also, about the cigarette - the guy with it is just smoking, ...
Aug 23, 2008 -
Re: Do you think...
I've grown up knowing girls on all ends of the spectrum, from sissy know-it-alls to agressive morons, so really, I don't know boundries. I usually just treat tougher females like ...
Aug 23, 2008 -
Re: When is the perfect weather?
I read in the rain, write during perfect weather, so when I'm stuck I can lie on my bed and look outside and get inspiration. ~JFW1415
Aug 23, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Saaaaint! You're hair's getting long. xD And puuuurty! ~JFW1415
Aug 23, 2008 -
Re: While the Chat is away... (Winner 1 Announced!)
Saint: I forgot what my prize was! And I'll forget to ask you... so please remind me to ask you? xD And is this still going on? ~JFW1415
Aug 22, 2008 -
Re: Rooftop Conversations
*Cowers* That's what I get for being lazy and not rereading the edited version a bunch before posting, eh? xD At least I didn't have tense changes! Haha. Anyways, thank ...
Aug 21, 2008 -
Re: Rooftop Conversations
This has been completely edited. I think I just needed to be yelled at by Heather. xD I like this version a lot better, so please critique? And thank you ...
Aug 21, 2008 -
Re: Get Out and Review!
Eh... make that around 65... xD *Whines* There are too many contests to enter! XD I shall... eventually! xD *Totally isn't procrastinating* ~JFW1415
Aug 21, 2008
