JFW1415

You sit down, fingers posed over the keyboard, mind buzzing with ideas, just bursting to write. After opening a blank document, the words begin to fall out. You finish with ...

Hey saves! JFW here. I was just browsing through the forums, and saw that this had no comments, so I decided to review it! (Well… it had no comments when ...

Nit-Picks My fist grew tighter and tighter as the lonesome minutes ticked by, slowly, one by one. Where was he? I'd ditch two things here. 1. Lonesome. You explain that ...

Hey Con! :) Well, I typically avoid critiquing something after Kylan, just since there's not much I can ever add, but I need to get back into the habit of ...

Snoink! Okay, well, I kinda stink at poetry. A lot. So I'm really not helpful here in the least... but I'll give it a shot? *Cringes* One rewording suggestion: The ...

Hey Nickelodeon! JFW here. You probably don't know me – I certainly don't know you – since I haven't been on in ages, but I've decided to critique your story ...

I nearly became a JM! But then I kinda disappeared from the site... I will return! *Hangs head in shame* I think we should turn YWS into a democracy and ...

Wooden at home. I LOOOOOOVE them. But I can't sharpen them at school - teachers yell - so... :) ~JFW1415

*Raises hand* Yepp, it was me. :) My friend was over and we were sugar high. It took you guys ages to get that one! I mentioned horses, and pigs, ...

Snoink prank called Snoink! :) ~JFW1415

All right, so my friend and I are starting a Youth Venture. It's a program that will give up to $1,000 to a group of two or more kids between ...

Also, it'd rock if you could get to your profile easier. Like, have the Home drop-down menu show "My Profile" too, or something? Yes! It takes so long to get ...

Looking great, but what about the random literary piece? Up beside the ad right now, below the header... the one where it shows a random one? Did I just not ...

I think there should be a section dedicated to the writers' main characters in the user profile section. There should be some fields where ther writer can show to the ...

*Kills Con* ~JFW1415