JFW1415

Yeah maybe he should. Why dont you do storybooks, there so much fun! Because in many storybooks you can use 'dont' for 'don't' and 'there' for 'they're'. ~JFW1415 *Was in ...

1) When did you join YWS? I joined on June 6, 2007. 2) Did you try out any other writing sites before you joined YWS? Yes, I did. 2.1) If ...

Haha, will do, OE. :) Sorry about the wait guys! I've been busy with school, but I should be relatively free tomorrow night, so expect them done by then. :) ...

The promised critique. Nit-Picks but he’d always been to o busy to talk to either of them much outside of Counsel. And he[s]r[/s] should be able to provide well, being ...

Hey Jiggster! Well, I'm really glad you asked for this critique. I actually owe you one from a while ago, but I kinda left YWS for a while and then ...

Yay! I'm really glad you posted something current, Jiggster! I owe you a critique from way back when but didn't want to do that old stuff. :) Anyways, I'm in ...

Hey! :) Nit-Picks The bamboo called to him and it wasn’t long before he let his lips touch the sweet flute; then he began to play a tune of his ...

You're both done. Anymore? ~JFW1415

The promised critique: Nit-Picks When I was in high school, I had a friend named Linda. I always used to imagine what it’d be like if Linda wound up with ...

The promised critique! Nit-Picks huddling in groups because the concrete's too cold to sit on or hustling money out of one another. The part after 'or' doesn't fit with the ...

*Is totally back* ~JFW1415

Conrad Rice: Amazing! Is always there for me and I love him to death. :) Karina: Again, amazing! And she rides horses! YAY! :) Sam: I haven't talked to her ...

*Waves* Nit-Picks The party had been going on for an hour when it went wrong, though by no fault of those hosting it. To avoid repeating 'party', I'd suggest starting ...

The summer has officially started, and school no longer has an iron grip on my life. I am re-entering the YWS life, so please bombard me with needed critiques so ...

Hey there! JFW here. :) Nit-Picks She couldn’t believe that she was actually on her father’s ship. She couldn’t believe that she was actually leaving the docks that she grew ...