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JFW1415

  • Writing Tips Re: What Is Your Favorite Writing Tip?

    I never recieved this tip, but it is what I live by and it works wonders. Just write a whole chapter, no matter how terrible or short it is. Then ...

    Jan 1, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Excuses

    Teacher: Where's your homework? Student: The goat ate it. Teacher: *Looks at student, unbelieving.* Student: Really! See? *Holds up chewed paper.* By the way, this really happened to me once! ...

    Dec 17, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Um... (peeking over shoulder)

    I LOVE password protects. When I was younger (Much younger) I would look at my brothers stuff, so this is very important. :P I use the same one for all ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Description- describing facial expressions

    I usually talk to myself in a mirror, and watch how I change my face. I only do this when my character in in an emotional situation, though. (With someone ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Names

    That's were I go. It's for names in the USA, though, so if your character is from Japan or something, I can't help you. (The only name I know from ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Whats a good length for a chapter?

    It depends. In Holes , the chapters were about half a page long. In Harry Potter , they were about ten pages long (if I remember correctly.) They were both ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Tips to Creating an Ending

    I can not plan ahead, no matter how hard I try. On a story I just wrote, I made myself write without erasing anything. In the beginning, the two girls ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: Curious about ' 's

    What if the original word ends in an 's'? That is the only version that confuses me. Like in this case: The lass's dog. In all forms: if there is ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: HELP!!! WRITERS BLOCK!!

    Just pick a random sentence (or word) and write. I actually have writer's block right now, so I shouldn't talk, but I did this a few months ago. I wrote ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Reasons to Kill

    Thanks for the critique, kitty15! I changed a few small things in the story, and reposted it above. I am also debating whether or not to make this into a ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Reasons to Kill

    Reasons to Kill "Sit. I’ll be finished in a moment.” I cringe when I hear her voice; it has hardened so much in the years since I last heard it. ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Part of my book... maybe?

    The characters are introduced too quickly. You pretty much rattle off some names. If you told us one or tow at a time, gave us some time, then introduced more, ...

    Sep 24, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Deleted!

    This was really good. Most of the second person I have read makes the story sound odd, but this fit perfectly. Kudos on writing it this way; second person and ...

    Sep 24, 2007
  • Lyrics Re: dont let them steal it

    Wow! I loved it! Just read it through and fix all the grammar mistakes, and it will be awesome. ~JFW1415

    Sep 21, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Last Prophet

    Well. That defiantely left me clinging to every word. :P I really understood how that boy must have felt. The only thing I found (I didn't really pay much attention ...

    Sep 21, 2007


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