JFW1415

I despise deadlines. I'm fine with them with most things, but with writing - especially creative writing, I can't do it. Also, I like instant gratification too much. I can't ...

Where's Manchester? There's one right here in NH, but I'm assuming that's not the same one. :) ~JFW1415

I'm told that I give very harsh critiques, but I don't really believe. I think it's just style. For example, Sam's critiques are super nice. I think that's because she ...

You know I love you Ally, but seriously – do you always have to write so much ? This is 12 pages. =/ Anyways, this is one of the two ...

Hey Ralph! Here's the extra critique you earned for submitting your contest entry in by the 15th. Just be warned – I haven't critiqued in ages, so this may not ...

*shrugs* I tell people apart by their avatars. (When that newbie used Mesh's I got soooo confused!) And I look at their style of writing. But I nearly never look ...

I am SO sending you cookies now. Just you wait. :) (*COOKIES!!!*) ~JFW1415

Men. My father. Failure. Being stupid. Lapsing back into depression. ~JFW1415

only the best guy on earth. duhhh ~JFW1415

There is now one spot open. There will only be one open at a time until February, when my finals are over. ~JFW1415

Hello! JFW here. I'll be your critiquer today. :) a few general things before we begin There are a few things that you need to look over to make your ...

I don't have much time, but I'm trying to keep up with my goal of one critique a day, so if something doesn't make sense be sure to PM me ...

My main complaint is that I don't buy it. I want to feel what he feels. But I'm not afraid, I'm not in pain, I'm not hungry, I don't feel ...

Ah, so you do let us call you Shery! All right, I'll resist the temptation to call you connie's sister. :) Just go join something else, whether it be online ...

Type up a critique pointing out every single detail. Delete half of it. Add 'great job though - just fix a few things and it'll be awesome!'. Post. Works for ...