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Here's the one I did the other day (well, last night and this morning,) on the country/state(?) that's been taking over my mind for the past few years. (GAH.) It ...

Luna: Have your character head to the farm. Samantha is going there, and can meet up with you (though they won't plan it) and they can talk and explore the ...

[Samantha Williams] Samantha stopped by the door to pull on her sneakers, the white on them stained brown with mud. She yanked on the laces impatiently, cursing under her breath ...

[Samantha Williams] "Good morning Harborville! It's another beautiful Saturday..." the radio began before Samantha stuck her hand out to shut off her alarm. She groaned and turned over in her ...

Hey! :P I've never done this type of thing before, so I don't really want a major character; I'll just be in the background a bit, if that's okay. :P ...

This no longer needs to be reviewed - I won't touch it. But I won't say no to praise, general comments that will help me with future essays, or if ...

If she is like a walking dictionary, I assume she is smart. Making up words, in my opinion, makes her seem more juvenile. I'm not sure, just somebody walking around ...

A everyone else said, this was too perfect for words. The only thing that can be improved (I think) is the age. It seems to keep switching from 5/6 to ...

Is he a bucket-theif life me?

A horse. What would you do if you were held at gunpoint and forced to choose between your mother and father to live with for the rest of your life, ...

Just a few things. Like everyone else, I believe it moved too quickly. The girl has a boyfriend she's aparently spending more and more time with, yet when this guy ...

This is an interesting story idea (in a good way.) If you do only want 15 examples, though, you might want to make each one longer. Maybe give tips? I'm ...

You're giving a speech to a crowd that includes judges? Cool. I would never have the guts to do that. :P All right, you said that you would put more ...

Thanks so much! I felt really stupid not knowing that. :P I still like my way better, but I bet I'll need to know how to do that some time. ...

Alright, I am in advanced math (grade eight) and everything, but I do not know how to do long division. :( I was taught two different ways to divide, and ...