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Name: Holly Marie Donovan Age: 15 Birthday: April 27th Hair: Light brown hair in soft waves that falls halfway down her upper-arms. She sometimes straightens her hair, and pulls half ...

I definitely agree with the spacing. I ended up just editing this in Word, adding my own paragraphs so it was readable. :P Since YWS doesn't allow us to use ...

Scream. If a black cat ran across you as you walked under a ladder while stepping on and breaking a mirror, what would you do?

...the bowl of bean salad overflowed. He yelled, "...

Isn't it something you can choose?

Isn't it?

Oh, you do have chapter two up. Since you have a poem here, too, just re-look at your poem for the first one; it doesn't seem like it fits too ...

First, I really enjoyed this piece. It correctly showed the ever-changing relationship between mother and daughter. I don't believe you need more background; loads of kids only have one parent, ...

Aw, you're so mean; you're not allowing me to be nit-picky! I absolutely loved this. Very captivating; I have a list of questions in my head that I would continue ...

Wow, I feel stupid. I had no idea this was about Cleopatra. (Not because you portrayed it poorly, because I don't know a thing about her. :P) I'm assuming that ...

Hey, I was just wondering what everyone did to procrastinate from writing/editing/planning/etc. I'm not sure if this is in the right spot (couldn't find anywhere else,) but I guess you ...

How should I know?

That's the fun of it. I just found out about this game about one minute ago, so I didn't technically lose (I found out about it from this thread.) Off ...

How can anyone smell the smoke with all the crazy people running around looking for a bucket?

Trust me; I STINK at drawing (my brother got all of the good drawing genes. :P) Try this; start drawing dots for cities and squiggly lines for rivers. Put cloud-shaped ...