JFW1415

[Holly] Holly rolled her eyes. “No, it’s not.” She chose to leave out the fact that she no longer did anything other than take care of the house and study, ...

[Holly] Holly walked beside her sisters and the two boys, her arms crossed in front of her defiantly. Her sisters stole quick glances at her, but she didn’t speak to ...

It's snowing. Again. ~JFW1415

Thanks, guys! I have only had one once, and it was only for a quick surgery and the recovery time. It was also several years ago, so I forget what ...

Eh, this is kind of old, but oh well. I'm a righty, but (in my school, at least,) no one really notices lefties. We have separate desks, so they don't ...

Hello! I just have a quick question on IV's for something I'm writing: What hand do they go in? Is it always the right, the left, or does it not ...

Lately I've read a lot of stories written by teens where they have swears in the narrative often. What do you guys think of this? I don't mind swearing in ...

I just saw it today, and I thought I was crazy for never noticing it before. Then I saw this and realized it was new. :P It looks awesome; I ...

[Holly] Holly sighed, wiping her brow with her sleeve. She had been cleaning all morning in preperation for her sisters coming home. There were cookies in the oven, fruit in ...

Today, yes. I had to work on a project in the library after school with other people (and I don't have their numbers) and it's due soon, and I wanted ...

Snowed here on Easter, rained like heck yesterday. Still pretty chilly, but no snow I'm afraid! (btw, your custom title rocks) Thanks! :P I just reached 250 posts a bit ...

It's snowing here, even though it is MARCH 28TH! I am very angry, especially since I had a lot of stuff I had to do in school after school that ...

[s]Oh, sounds interesting. :P I'll post a bio later on.[/s] Changed my mind; I don't have time for another. Sorry! ~JFW1415

Like someone else suggested, simply edit this in the original posting. If you want to be able to tell the difference between the critiques, simply do what I do; post ...

Hello! Once again, I'm not going to bother with grammar; I'll leave that to someone with more time. A few basic questions you should clarify: Where is she? Who is ...