JCK

Like the other reviewers, I don't know why you'd think of your writing as lame. It's pretty good and this particular piece of writing is thought inspiring but vague, which ...

Enjoyable, one grammatical mistake. You said breathe when you meant breath. Other than that, a good poem. A little bit annoying with the odd cases of rhyming then not rhyming, ...

This poem obviously means something to you, I can see that very well in the way you're writing it. It's in a rather emotional style which I'm not particularly fond ...

Again, I'm not much of a poet, I'll get back to writing stories soon. I wrote this, in fact, in order to inspire myself for an idea I've had lately. ...

Well, you rhymed, and if that was your reason for writing this poem then I would say mission accomplished. It's simple and I like that, but this particular poem is ...

May I suggest you just copy and paste your story on to here? As you have joined today, you may be considered untrustworthy and people will hesitate to download the ...

It's vague, very vague. The poem flowed nicely, and was definitely interesting. However, it didn't really spark anything within me. I felt as though I was reading a message that ...

We die with ourselves as nothing can’t remember. one tiny grammatical error in that line There's no error.

I have no grammatical issues with this work, but it's not normally the kind of thing I like to read. I mean, it did its job. This piece has changed ...

Didn't really know where to post this as it was just another spur of the moment thing. I'm not even sure if it's a poem. How sad would it be ...

I like it. Unlike the reviewer above me I think that the colloquial language worked quite well, it offers that questioning feeling. That's a really good thing for a beginning ...

Okay, Thanks!

Besides Writing? Well, I enjoy a lot of things beside writing; I enjoy playing the guitar, fencing, walking, cycling and surprisingly I kind of enjoy school at the minute. But ...

Truthfully, I loved that. It has that subtle dark tone that is very hard to maintain without going over-the-top. I also like how it's simple, as some of the more ...

Writing has always been a secret passion of mine. That’s a definite truth. I knew I was never alone in the hobby, but I’ve never particularly craved for anyone else ...