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I'd really appreciate a review on my Prologue for a novel I'm going to be writing, titled Atlantis It's a sci-fantasy story, which I hope you like!

It was so cold that it slowly began to awaken me from my unconsciousness. I really don't like this sentence. I don't know why, and it's just my opinion. It ...

As I don't know the rhythm of the song, at times it felt a little awkward. However, I'm confident that if given whatever music you used whilst writing this it'd ...

The darkness I reject through my unrelenting will to prevent the evil barging into my life. The soul that drives me to go on weakens, as of exposed to the ...

I've added to and not really changed the original concept for the prologue I had, but this is like the third or something draft, I think it feels a little ...

I liked this, a truly simplistic and beautiful poem. It actually meant something to me, which is rare, and I feel like it's a warning to people who don't take ...

What more can I ask from you? when you've given me the last poison, that shall eternally remain. Slight typo. Just pointing it out. (I also think that What more ...

t's a sci-fi, right? Just guessing... It's going to be more of a sci-fi/fantasy. A sci-fantasy. Thanks for all the great comments so far, guys!

Thanks guys, but I was wondering how I could improve it?

Really want to know what you guys think, I'm starting to write this and wanted a cover for inspiration. I just used Photoshop CS3.

I didn't really like this, it sounded like you were trying a little too hard to leave a resonant message. But nothing for me, I'm afraid. As the other reviewer ...

Please delete. Please delete.Please delete.Please delete. Please delete. Please delete.

Another little poem. The night sky is clear, and the moon is bright. Inspiration came and voila. I'll write some short stories and possibly release a chapter of a novel ...

Liked this quite a lot, for what it is. It's short and simple and it has a kind of echo-effect on my mind, allowing me to over-analyse the message you're ...

That's really why I dislike writing poetry. Especially rhyming. I've never cared for stanzas, truthfully, I just write. Thanks for your input ancientforever. I'll perhaps take this down and revise ...