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JAGuerrero

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Liars Incorporated

    Thank you for reviewing and giving some suggestion, It wasn't really suppose to be told from a letter point of view. In the end Dallas,Patrick, and the other pseudonym given ...

    Oct 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Journal Entry One: Aulani:

    I think you may have rushed this a little being the first Journal Entry, also we don't know a whole lot about the character yet.

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Frozen

    This is a very well thought out rhyming poem, I love the detail and hard-work you put into this. Keep writing because you are a very good poet.

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Psyche--contest entry

    This was a very well written short Story.

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: You Found Me

    Loved it.

    Jul 4, 2011


People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage