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Re: Ladies
Ladies The slide of the fingers and the wave of the waist makes the men wanna talk and the boys wanna chase it shows the honey of the lips and ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Ladies
Ladies The slide of the fingers and the wave of the waist makes the men wanna talk and the boys wanna chase it shows the honey of the lips and ...
Dec 12, 2008 -
Re: pain
this was really good. i'm kinda confused because i wrote on this before but i don't think i posted it because for some reason it's not on here. I wrote ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: What is real?
This poem is really interesting. The most important part of the poem that it couldn't live without is 'So that means you can only be but a figment of my ...
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: Poetry Fight
This poem was good. who were you writing to ... it seemed as if you were really in a war with someone... i know exactlly how you feel. The peom ...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: What to write
No... OK first of all it is not stupid. I can't even begin to tell you how many times i just sit up at night and think of what to ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Another Love Poem
This poem shows a lot of love and thinking on the narrator's part. My favorite part was when you said that the love was there and that you'd tried to ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Autumn
Autumn As the wind sent wisp of hair around her face The back of her skirt blew up in disgrace Then an old woman sidles by Two young children run ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: childhood.
I really did like this poem. i believe you really captured the essence of childhood in a short sentence. I love the part where you say "Before iPods,cell phones and ...
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: To an Unloved Rose.
Oh my god! i loved it... but i must admit i felt totally stupid the first ( no really the second and third time) time i read it. I had ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: Questions
oh my god i absolutely loved this poem. My favorite part is when you say that someone will get hurt and that theirs no avoiding it. That is the harxdest ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: Secrets
This story is the most touching one i have read today. (and trust me there were plenty) This is true because there are so many cases when girls fall in ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: Secret Series Book 1: New beginnings: chapter 2
Simone is another student who is on her way to S.X.T. (Simon X. Tierney boarding school for the talented). The first chapter was about jade and this is Simone Chapter ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: White Tree
so are you meaning to tell me that before the time of the picture you'd never seen it snow before? that's cray-z i don't know how life would be for ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: Things Left Unsaid
This story was... nice. I almost cried at the end. I swear that i did. you did good in explaining the feelings of both characters. I just don't get one ...
Jul 7, 2008
